A Fairy Story

alot of the things in this story about the fairies is ripped of of tinker bell. tinker fairies tinkering, garden fairies making and planting seeds, defending against pests..blue crystals being the source of yellow pixie dust, along with the tree. even if it wasnt ripped off, its a horrible story and horribly written. instead of saying this is what you created and saying "the new human king" or "my fairy children", why not just make it a story about humans and fairies whose lives were crashed by a horrible creature. why would you create a creature and give it the choice of being good or evil?..the plot is decent but wasnt written very well. Puncuation and wording needs alot of work. There should also be alot of changes in the storyline itself. Because of the way the story was written it made it too boring to read, I couldnt get past 4 pages without getting so irritated by it, I had to put it down. I would enjoy it alot more if it were rewritten in a way that is more original and proper.

Easy to read. Not the best writing but holds your interest just enough to keep going. Some elements of the story seem to have been taken from "a popular children's fairy movie series" (won't say which one but if you read it you will see). May be some hidden meanings/purpose behind this story....GMO's? Artificial foods/Overweight populations?... If you don't try to pick apart the story or find deeper meaning like I tend to do then would probably be a great read for the tween to early teen years??

Is a reminder to all of us that we must each be loving and ever aware That we each with love and wisdom Can stop the worst with joy .