
Wylie Shupe
I enjoyed it. I thought it was a pretty fun read with some interesting world building and lore! It does have some grammatical errors, but nothing that makes it difficult to read. I was also not the biggest fan of the romance scenes. It just felt like it was a bit too much, especially when they are only like 16, almost 17 in Morts case. Other than that it was an enjoyable read! Will give the second book a go for sure!

Stormfather
A decent premise, but the book is riddled with spelling and grammar errors, run-on sentences, and contradictory statements. The dialogue is awkward, and characters seem to barely even think about it before deciding to go off and kill someone.

James Grady
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lovely story, but needed about 200 more pages of character development. if you like your story being thrown at you thick and fast then this is the book for you.