Ever Witch Chronicles Collection 1

Great story, but the grammar/spelling errors really take away from the enjoyment of reading. There were missed/extra words, flipped homonyms, and other such errors. Please, get Grammarly or some other application to help you proofread if you struggle with such things before you publish. I know it's just a free online fantasy book but still - have pride in your work, please. The only other feedback I have is that the heroine's character building could have used a bit more. It was a huge leap from, "I know nothing about magic" to "super-witch with epic powers" within two weeks, while also neglecting to create the storyline to better understand why she is so reluctant to share about her wound. (Is it her traumatic childhood? Is it only the necklace?) I feel this would have created a much stronger character... Other than that, it is a great story, with shifters, witches, warlocks, hybrids, and just a little teen love/angst. I look forward to more.

i thoroughly enjoyed the first 2 books you wrote and the suspense will kill me not knowing the end of this great story. Please keep on writting these fabulous stories.

I'm in love with this book!! It's definitely not your typical dragon/witch book. Excellent storyline, which definitely keeps you hooked and wanting more!! 👍 😀 👏 well done!!