
Brittany Thompson
You have every element needed for a successful book, but it seems that you lack in creativity towards the end. I don't ever look at the number of pages in a book because of this: it's not very difficult to sense the end of the book. In your book, I did just that. I feel like you got tired of writing and just "wrapped it up" too quickly, and too openly. Nice start, though.

Julie Bruno
I found this book randomly, but I am so glad I did. My goal is to read eighty-five books this year, and so far, this has been one of my favorites. Even through the hardships, there were quite a few laughs in this story.

December Vwelcher
I love this book. There were times where i got a little confused however overall the book was amazing. You should consider doing a part 2, as if Tommie as a teenager And what effects has the incidents from the first book affected her now as a teenager. Or maybe you could have her be an adult raising her own child and going through some drama. Just saying i would love to see where this book could go. I hope you are actually reading these comments. Its great feed back. Keep writing! !!!
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