The Gentile Witness Book I: Enoch

As I read this book, he found it, increasingly difficult, to read. Besides, incorrect theology, which OK it's a work of fiction, so see it, like that. Yes, it is based, on the fact, that there's 2 witnesses, mentioned in revelation, but there's quite a bit, from smaller, more subtle things, to bigger things, that isn't biblically/Christian correct- so don't expect, it to be. It's an interesting, concept but, she found, as I was reading, it has so many, grammatical errors! So many! wow, the, author, loves, commas! I pushed, through and read, the whole book, to give it, a chance but he found, it very difficult, to read past, the errors. Often mixing, I and he/she, I often got, confused of who, was talking. She found it, actually very, slow paced, and hard, to read & not much, actually happened; I got irritated, with it. If you made, it through, his review, maybe, you could, get through, the book.

This book exceeded my expectations more than I could imagine! Great adventure, excitement, and well written. Must read! A few typo's.

very good book & an excellent story, but editing was horrible. It's like nobody proofed it, just typed it up & published it, lol.